#NaPoWriMo Day 24/ Poem — Free Verse — “Bird Dreams” #amwritingpoetry


For NaPoWriMo Day 24: my own prompt again.


Credit: Coral Birds Pinterest


There was a bird coral flushed, torn in the Red Sea waves,

And she floated in the healing, until her wings were drenched in mineral salts.

She preened on a rock, wings coated in salt-dust;

But, one day a storm raged and she was drenched in the mud.

The healing earth, and brokenness beneath meant nothing.

Rain washed, and she spread her plush coral feathers — lunged for the sky;

The salt and mud weighed, not much had fallen-smooth away.

But, she flew anyways — some birds fly despite;

They rise, even if you hold them down;

If you clip their wings, their feathers still grow rapid.

If you hear not a squawk, don’t be surprised if you do — she talks, no moment is right, but there’s reasons beneath silence.

It takes time to soar weighted by sludge, to balance weights on your wings;

But she’s flying and she’s okay, she might send a squawk your way —

Depends if you’re a bird person, or weighted to cement delusions.

She might squawk, or she might fly onto the tangerine sunset,

Where the saltless waters are clean, and her wingspan for a moment’s graceful.


©️Mandibelle16. (2019) All Rights Reserved.

2 thoughts on “#NaPoWriMo Day 24/ Poem — Free Verse — “Bird Dreams” #amwritingpoetry”

  1. They rise, even if you hold them down;

    This is a powerful, climactic line. The life of the bird before, during, and after being flooded (and held down) is drawn with great skill. This is a poetic parable for the rest of us. Great work, Amanda!

    I hope you’re having a fine week.

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    1. Thank you Christopher. You’re spot on. Perhaps, just that no matter what you view as an obstacle or difficulty in life you can you can push through it. Despite flaws or difficulties. But it takes time, and it’s a struggle. Thank you for reading again.

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