Three Line Tales: Fiction – Unreachable #3LineTales #amwriting #fiction

Thanks to Sonya of Only 100 Words for hosting #3LineTales.

Credit: Marc Olivier Jodoin via Unsplash

An ominous sky opened-up last night, but today we dodged puddles and laughed; we ambled as the bakeries opened teasing or senses. The city was vibrant, thousands of people dodging each other with determined steps, bumping without pausing to apologize; no one noticing budding trees or the verdant grass glistening — all was white-noise. Even the quake of a jet flying low effected no one, and I tripped inside a puddle, lost in my thoughts; my hand was strangely empty of yours — you stared from the pot-hole, unreachable.

©Mandibelle16. (2018) All Rights Reserved.


4 thoughts on “Three Line Tales: Fiction – Unreachable #3LineTales #amwriting #fiction

  1. clcouch123 June 8, 2018 / 4:02 pm

    The existential cast of the narrative, especially as it’s expressed toward the conclusion, is telling and impressive. In a world of numbing distraction, do we see each other? Really fine work, Amanda.

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    • mandibelle16 June 8, 2018 / 7:58 pm

      Thanks Christopher. I’m ha pay you enjoyed. I’m also always thrilled you get right to the heart of my poems 🙂

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