#NovemberNotes Day 3/Saturday Mix: Poem – Quadrille – “Lay Me Down” #poetry #saturdaymix #dVerse


Today’s November Notes song is “All the Pretty Girls” by Kaleo. I’m combining the song prompt with WhimsyGizmo of #dVerse Poet’s Pub Quadrille prompt on kick and MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie SaturdayMix Prompt on using synonyms for these words: odd, fight, start, weak, tired. 


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Credit: Jacob Townsend Unsplash

 

“All the Pretty Girls” – Kaleo 


You sail in the sky,

Float back to earth.

I’m meekwaning, 

Waiting for you —

To let me in.

Strength has vanished,

Battle inside aches.

I’m kicking passed eternities,

In strangeness. 

Pretty girls fall,

Without fuel to recharge. 

Please lay me down,

Lay with me tonight.


©Mandibelle16. (2017) All Rights Reserved.

4 thoughts on “#NovemberNotes Day 3/Saturday Mix: Poem – Quadrille – “Lay Me Down” #poetry #saturdaymix #dVerse

  1. Michael November 7, 2017 / 4:39 pm

    Lovely Mandi, but I think you’ll find the credit for Saturday Mix belongs to weejars…

    Liked by 1 person

    • mandibelle16 November 7, 2017 / 7:08 pm

      Hi Michael, Yes I noticed that and did change the link. Although somehow your linked in as well. I did think it was odd u were holding Saturday Mix lol. Thanks I’m glad you liked the poem 🙂

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