#OctPoWriMo Day 25/ Saturday Mix: Poem – Triolet – “Waves and White Sandy Beaches” #SaturdayMix #poetry #amwriting


OctPoWriMo Day 25 has prompt them on satisfaction and delicious food. Also, combining with Sarah of MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie Saturday Mix Prompt on opposing words.  The words are above and below and shallow and deep from the October 14, 2027 Prompt. 

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“ Triolet is a traditional poetry form that consists of one stanza that is eight lines long. It has the rhyme scheme ABaAabAB, in which the first, fourth and seventh lines are the same and the second and eighth line are the same.

In the example, we show you how this breaks down, and show you the rhyme scheme:
Line 1 (A): Take me back to those yesterdays. Line 2 (B): When love, and life and I was new Line 3 (a): and full of easy, girl-child ways. Line 4 (A): Take me back to those yesterdays Line 5 (a): before carefree lost to lean-hipped sway Line 6. (b): before I gave me, stained-red to you. Line 7 (A): Take me back to those yesterdays, Line 8 (B): When love and life I was new.”

(Herheartpoetry.com) 

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Credit: Ethan Robertson via UnSplash

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 Gazing above to warm white sand beaches. 

Waves lullabies in the shallows, granting rest. 

Stress below surface melts with Bellinis peach. 

Gazing above to warm white sand beaches,  

Reading, wadding avoiding ocean deep

Breathing in seasurf, breezes relaxing breath. 

Gazing above to warm white sand beaches. 

Waves lullabies in the shallows, granting rest. 

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