#OctPoWriMo Day 11: Quadrille – “Sparks of Fire” #amwriting #poetry #dVerse 


For OctPoWriMo Day 11 the Prompt is dancing. I will also combine the prompt with WhimsyGizmos #dVerse Poet’s Pub Quadrille prompt. 

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Credit: Jacob Avanzato via Unsplash

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Sensuous con bravo.  

Twirling weapon, 

Revelling in sunlight. 

She turns, reels; 

Lifts feet, bends legs, 

She’s a blood red rose, 

Piercing thorns. 

Arms graceful, vivace. 

Precariously spinning, 

Molto Protissimo. 

Sparkling eyes, 

Con adorazione, 
Loving batons —
Sharp challenge;

Dancing becomes, 

Enduring speranza. 

Sensual rhythm, 

Crescendoing into —

Sparks. 

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Italian Translations:

Con Bravo – With Bravo (a strong presence) 

Vivace – Lively

Molto – Very 

Protissomo – Very very fast 

Con adorazione – With Adoration

Speranza – Hope 

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7 thoughts on “#OctPoWriMo Day 11: Quadrille – “Sparks of Fire” #amwriting #poetry #dVerse ”

  1. Mandibelle, this is sexy and sensuous, and gorgeous, and I LOVE the use of hope in another language! To be a true Quadrille, though, it needs to be exactly 44 words long (not including the title.) This one has a few too many words. Can you shave a few? I would really like to leave it up as a Quadrille link at dVerse, as it is breathtaking.

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    1. Thank you so much. I’m so thrilled you like it. Yes my counting sucks and I will ensure I go through this tomorrow to make it perfect. I’ll let you know when I’ve fixed it. Again, thank you so much 😊

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    2. Hi whimsy, I did cut down the poem. I wasn’t paying attention yesterday and realized today I was a lot over. I’ve counted a few times and keep getting 44 words. So I hope that’s what you count as well. Thanks again 🙂

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