Photo Challenge: Poem – Quadrille – “Far Too Real” #poetry #dverse #photochallenge


Thanks to Bjorn from #dVerse Poet’s Pub for hosting a prompt about writing a poem asking questions only. Also, thanks to NEKNEERAJ of MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie for hosting this week’s photo Challenge. 

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Credit: Mark Harless

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Lady of the forest, 

Your thirst is quenched? 

You’ve found ambrosia waters? 

Supped on nectar sweet? 

Diana, Huntress, do you —

Wander meadows, 

Before ether sleep?  

Are you alert —

With bow, arrows? 

Drinking so deeply, 

Your body flourishes, 

Wild flowers? 

Bathing in Gaia’s silence? 
Wondering where, 

Your people went? 

Knowing they’re Mythology;

And you’re far too real

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©Mandibelle16. (2017) All Rights Reserved. 

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I'm a Canadian girl who loves the local sports scene. The NHL and CFL And recently, some NFL games. Also, I’m into hatha yoga, walks in the river valley; drawing and painting, makeup, hairstyles, and the beauty niche. Also, I enjoy learning about improving my writer the other topics in seminars, classes, TED Talks, and podcasts. I’m a casual Freelance writer and worker. Both on various subjects of academia in the humanities, social sciences, business, arts, and architecture. I’ve also freelanced blog in beauty, health, skincare, and related topics. I’m an excellent researcher in most any subject. I’m also a freelancer of a different kind for a company called Givergy. Moreover, I love dogs and love hanging out with my friends and family whenever I'm able. I enjoy spring, summer, and early fall when the weathers warm and there are many festivals and activities occurring. I'm also a writing fanatic. Check-out some of my published poetry on www.spillwords.com. I’ve been published on other literary sites, as well. Recently, I had a short story published in a Cinderella Anthology, Cinderella Reimagined. It’s available here: https://www.amazon.com/Cinderella-Reimagined-Anthology-Retellings/dp/1979701970/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1523903011&sr=8-1&keywords=cinderella+reimagined If you need to contact me or are a blogger/writer or a blogger for a cause and are interested in being Interviewed, please visit my ‘contact page’ at the top of my blog.

18 thoughts on “Photo Challenge: Poem – Quadrille – “Far Too Real” #poetry #dverse #photochallenge”

  1. Your poem is a treat to read and would stand well on its own (without the photo, though I like the photo). The sounds are paired in technical and enjoyable ways, such as “sleep” appearing close to “deeply” and “arrows” near “flourished.” Good vowel and consonant rhyme. I hope you’re really well. I’m trying to manage.

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    1. Hi Christopher,
      I’m so happy to hear from you! I was wondering about you the other day. I’m glad you liked my quadrille, there essentially a poem in 44 words. The picture was from a photo prompt but very inspiring. And I’m glad the poem could stand alone and I have to admit on this poem, the alliteration and assonance just happened. I guess after awhile we know that those devices make a poem sound good so it’s easier to use them. Sometimes I try to do them
      Intentionally but it usually works out better when I don’t. So glad you stopped by and I’m praying for your healing as always. Things are pretty good. I couldn’t reapply for my MFA this year due to some other business going on in life but I’m crossing my fingers for next year, or at the very least doing a certificate in creative writing online at U of Toronto or Simon Frazier University in BC online. But still aiming for that eventually.
      Meanwhile I’m finding podcasts very helpful in writing.
      If you like, you can take a look at some of those. I regularly listen to the Creative Writer’s Tool Belt and some that are just funny or entertaining. You might enjoy them if u don’t already listen 🙂
      Cheers my friend,
      Stay well! 🙏🎈

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    1. Thanks Frank. Do you know before u mentioned I didn’t see it like that way but rereading I can see how that makes sense and actually like your interpretation better than my own. Mine was that Diana was the last of the Greek gods/goddesses but I prefer the idea that all the humans are mythology and only the gods remain.
      Thanks for stopping by 🙂

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