Three Line Tales: Waltz of the Jellyfish #3LineTales #fiction #amwritimg 

Thanks to Sonya of Only 100 Words for hosting #3LineTales


Credit: Joel Filipe via UnSplash


Clouds of puffs with white tentacles deadly, swimming beneath the ocean’s sheltering waves. Peaceful movements grace and elegance defined; their dance a waltz in the deep deep dark, a flighty whispy dance of ethereal circumstance. They glide through the seas, their glow a light in the dark; the jellyfish waltz alone, then, together in the day, in the inky darkness beneath seas traumatic surface. 


©Mandibelle16. (2017) All Rights Reserved. 

13 thoughts on “Three Line Tales: Waltz of the Jellyfish #3LineTales #fiction #amwritimg 

  1. cyranny June 22, 2017 / 1:54 pm

    I love the way your words flow in this piece… Three lines, like waves, transporting us with the stinging jellyfish 🙂 Thank you for sharing!

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    • mandibelle16 June 22, 2017 / 2:23 pm

      Thanks so much Cyranny. I was trying to get that under the water feeling where things are quiet and still.

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      • cyranny June 22, 2017 / 2:26 pm

        Well done… I could feel the suddle rocking of the sea 🙂

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  2. Singledust June 22, 2017 / 5:00 pm

    The flow of your words were just like the mysterious jelly fish in the photo prompt, made me think of slowing gliding with them as they floated about with no purpose but keeping a hidden secret between themselves. And I was straining to hear their secret! Lovely writing Mandibelle!

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    • mandibelle16 June 22, 2017 / 10:41 pm

      Thank yo again SD, you are right on again. I would like to know their secret too but whatever it is, it’s between them sadly. And no one wants to get stung lol. Yes the flow or flow or them floating was the image I was going for, Glad it worked, thanks again. Also, your interview was very popular even the second time around 🙂

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      • Singledust June 22, 2017 / 10:58 pm

        you did write it very fluidly and I was mesmerized. The interview, oh really?! yes I need to go check out what’s been up at the cafe, really bogged down with a project at work. Thank you for doing such a great job with it!

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      • mandibelle16 June 22, 2017 / 11:01 pm

        No worries your answers were wonderfully detailed and required little editing. It’s fun to do 🙂

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    • mandibelle16 June 22, 2017 / 10:58 pm

      Thanks so much JR. I was going for flow and a their movement underneath the sea, quiet and almost lulling.


  3. Joy Pixley June 24, 2017 / 11:19 am

    Others already used this word, but it’s the right word for the job: wonderful flow to the words, it really evokes the fluid, underwater dance.

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    • mandibelle16 June 25, 2017 / 12:35 pm

      Thank you so much Joy. I’m glad what I was trying to give the effect of worked 🙂

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