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100 Word Wednesdays: Poem – Quadrille – “False Eden” #amwriting #poetry #100WordWednesdays #flashfiction 


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Credit: Bikurgurl

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Eden fed us, 

Juicy tomatoes, 

Dripping down cheeks. 

Sweet aubergine onions, 

Avocados verdant, 

Soft melting glories. 

Plethora of fruits, 

Crisp vegetables, 

Burgeoning. 

Flourish of nature,

Ancestoral heritage. 

Our Eden desired, 

Banquet addicting, 

As Greek Lotus flowers. 

Utopia negated, 

Parody, Pandamonium. 

Ripest and best, 

We couldn’t have, 

Bellies growling, 

Hunger forever, 

Cursed, 

Never sated, 

Never full. 

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©Mandibelle16. (2017) All Rights Reserved. 

2 thoughts on “100 Word Wednesdays: Poem – Quadrille – “False Eden” #amwriting #poetry #100WordWednesdays #flashfiction ”

    1. I know I’m a big fan. I was trying to form an image of this place that was supposed to be like Eden. But was like an anti-Eden. All these wonderful vegetables to eat but no matter how much they ate they were never full or sated so it was rather s punishment to eat them as their stomachs growled and still felt like they had eaten nothing. Thanks for reading 🙂

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