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Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer: Poem – Rictameter – “The Angel” #amwriting #flashfiction #poetry  


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Credit: Louise – The Storyteller’s Abode

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Here’s she,

His sweet angel,

Wearing her frothy gown,

She’s beautiful, elegant,

A wife any man could love or desire.

She’s the epitome, the standard,

What women should be like,

Humming music,

Here’s she.

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Her hair,

Perfectly coiffed,

Mother of six children,

Few lines on her face, she holds up.

Although, life’s pressure can be confining,

Her lips smile a gesture rehearsed.

What’s underneath in her —

Boarding school mind,

Her hair?

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Model,

She’d wants all to —

Perceive she’s the perfect wife.

Society expects her to —

Set perfect example because —

She’s upperclass, the lead in the charade.

Acting as the moral —

Center, she must

Model

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Portrait,

Of the great dame,

Her family, pride, joy,

Madame’s smile is slipping because,

Performing all the time is exhausting.

She wonders if she might sit with —

Port to sip, not thinking,

Herself; not a —

Portrait

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©Mandibelle16. (2017) All Rights Reserved

13 thoughts on “Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer: Poem – Rictameter – “The Angel” #amwriting #flashfiction #poetry  ”

  1. I love your focus on the woman and how you really fleshed her out as a person and made her three-dimensional, revealing her desires to be a perfect wife and so on. It made me take a second look at the woman in the painting. Well written, Mandi!

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  2. its hard to be perfect all the time never letting the mask and perfection crack. she needs to know she is a warm woman under all that expectation she has layered upon herself. I love the nuances you have created in your few lines, lives of a myriad of women portrayed here. And the sometimes impossible burden we heave upon ourselves. Lovely as always Mandibelle.

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    1. She’s a Victorian woman of the upperclass, she has things expected of her and I think if she let her mask slip, it would be awful for her. It’s very sad. I’m glad you liked the portrait. Thanks for commenting 🙂

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