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Friday Fictioneer: Field of Broken Dreams #amwriting #flashfiction 


Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting FF.

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Credit: Liz Young

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I was out to meet my friend who lived nearby when I found this ravaged mannequin head. Her exquisite hazel eyes and pencilled brows, lifted towards the sky as if mannequin heaven was there. 

In reality her mutilated head lies in the tall grass. A used beer bottle leans against her face, an empty red cigarette package nearby. 

If she was alive I think she’d be wondering how she ended up here? Why she wasn’t the modelesque mannequin in the window display for Holt Renfrew or at least for H&M. Who had tossed her out like refuse and left her to this fate? 

Count: 91 words

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“Boulevard of Broken Dreams” By Green Day

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©Mandibelle16. (2017) All Rights Reserved. 

24 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneer: Field of Broken Dreams #amwriting #flashfiction ”

    1. That’s very interesting how we put human qualities into something which isn’t human but looks it. I think we personify a lot of things which aren’t human, things that look like us in particular.

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    1. Hi Dale, yes I’m from Alberta. 🍁 I did see that one a while back. I was actually thinking of a children’s show “Today’s Special” which was about a mannequin coming to life at night. It was on when I was in primary school. Thanks for your comment 🙂

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