Friday Music Prompt:  Poem – A L’Arora – ” Obesssion Deludes” #amwriting #poetry #music 

Thanks to MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie for hosting the Friday Music Prompt. Friday’s song was, “Waiting for Tonight” by Jennifer Lopez.


“Waiting For Tonight” – Jennifer Lopez


Credit: Art Nouveau VSCOcam, painting art on Instagram

(Her View) 

Tonight’s the night he’s meeting me here later

Passions ignited, we’ve fires, need sating

All the desires of our time together, at last met

I’ll be shaking, moaning, chasing the stars

Caught in the moment, we’ll shatter as glass

Wrapped in your strong arms, I’ll have a blast. 

Waiting for tonight, excitement beaming

When you and I are lovers holding,  fast. 


Preening, applying makeup and shaking

Preparing for you, our first time creating. 

Ensuring our night’s perfect; it’ll end complete. 

Skin grazingcaressing, nothing sub-par

Lovers busy enjoying repast

Perfect lingerie, beneath a gown fast

Becoming a favourite; it’s perfect and tight

Rip it off, no need to be so classy


Waiting for tonight, our love embracing, 

Perfection between us, this night for our sake. 

I’ve planned it exactly, we’ll not overstep

Each moments vital, at the finale beseech. 

Give into our lust, marvel in love far —

Better than any you’ve ever had; here we’ll last, 

Until mornings stunning rays of light

I wait for him, he’s mine; trembling, my hands clasp.


(His View) 

Tonight it came, the nightmare couldn’t wait

She’s obssessed, unstable, any day she’ll break.

Better to stop, was never invested, not set

On staying with her; she’s a whale beached.

Though thin like a beanpole, not nice at all

Loathsome personality, running fast —

Driving passed; her obsession frightening

I was ‘nice’ once or twice, now there’s an impasse.  


Need freedom, her annoying voice I hate,

Can life be normal again? Not Hell made? 

Can I touch the one I love, and not regret

Bringing him into drama; twice I cheated, 

Boyfriend enraged; a dumb girl caused my fall. 

 Told her, “I like men most;” but left aghast —

She doesn’t care, spoiled girl; not smart, no insight, 

Traps into engagement; I’ll always pass


© Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved. 


20 thoughts on “Friday Music Prompt:  Poem – A L’Arora – ” Obesssion Deludes” #amwriting #poetry #music 

    • mandibelle16 January 2, 2017 / 9:38 pm

      Lol. Yes I don’t know though. They both seem like such, convoluted and self-seeking individuals. I can’t picture them understanding each other, even if it’s obvious to the reader! Thanks for your comment Jacqueline!

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    • mandibelle16 January 3, 2017 / 3:12 pm

      Thanks so much Mihrank. Are you still working on your interview for me? I know the holidays are just ending but maybe you could have that for next by January’s end? I would love to follow your guys new page 🙂


      • helaryyannick January 3, 2017 / 3:16 pm

        Nice to meet you happy New year .what do you think about this site helped .I want to creat it

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      • mandibelle16 January 3, 2017 / 3:42 pm

        You have very nice photographs but unfortunately my French isn’t good enough to understand much of the writing. All the best!


      • helaryyannick January 3, 2017 / 3:58 pm

        Thanks, ho sorry for the traduction my texte is only french, I Will write it in english ,tomorow if you want ?

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      • mandibelle16 January 3, 2017 / 4:59 pm

        Whatever you like best. I think there should be translation tool on my iPad!


      • helaryyannick January 3, 2017 / 4:03 pm

        The concept of the site relates to the sharing of knowledge from particular to particular in several possible fields

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  1. Coyote from Orion January 3, 2017 / 7:59 am

    Interesting. Just watched some Swedish film too. A lot of things seem stuck in misunderstanding… Mercury retro til Sunday x

    Liked by 1 person

    • mandibelle16 January 3, 2017 / 3:07 pm

      Thank you Coyote. Indeed, they need to chat I think and sort it out. Although,I’m not sure she would listen.

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  2. sanaarizvi January 3, 2017 / 1:46 pm

    Whistles!!❤️💖This is absolutely stupendous writing, Mandi 😀 you have created such magic with your words. Sigh.. worth a countless more reads! Thank you so much for participating at Music Prompt at MLMM. Wishing you a most prosperous new year ahead ❤️💖

    Lots of love,

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    • mandibelle16 January 3, 2017 / 3:06 pm

      Thank you Sanaa. I’m happy you like it! Have a great 2017 as well 😀


    • mandibelle16 January 3, 2017 / 7:08 pm

      Yep, always a problem, not vocally communicating. They’d both be pretty surprised I think. Thanks for reading!

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