November Notes: Poem – Day 14 – English Sonnet – “In Jealousy” #amwriting #writing #poetry #music 


Today’s song prompt is “Tenerife Sea” by Ed Sheeran.

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“Tenerife Sea” – Ed Sheeran

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Credit: Exes Archive – Classic 105

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He looked at her, in her awful dress; he —

Told her, the way her hair fell was pretty.

He never noticed me, my jealousy. 

All he saw was her; their love made him witty. 

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He was joyful around her, said forget —

Lies people tell, talking behind their back. 

Envious I spread more discord, I was set —

To move in; that Beth, she was such a brat.

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He liked me first, but then he saw sweet Beth, 

Told her: “If she’s the last thing he should see–

He wouldn’t be sad, forget or regret; 

[I bawled] she was all he would ever need.” 

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Her eyes were the the blue of the Tenerife Sea, 

Envy upset me; he loved Beth —not me. 

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©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved. 


10 thoughts on “November Notes: Poem – Day 14 – English Sonnet – “In Jealousy” #amwriting #writing #poetry #music 

  1. Melinda Kucsera November 14, 2016 / 8:34 pm

    Wow, you show the destroying power of jealousy to perfection in this one. She can’t get past it to see there’s more to life than him!

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    • mandibelle16 November 14, 2016 / 8:48 pm

      Yeah forsure. I decide to change it up since most songs are centred on love or the inside troubles of that love. What about from the outside.? Thank you Melinda 🙂

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      • Melinda Kucsera November 14, 2016 / 8:52 pm

        I love it. It’s a great idea and you’re right. If you don’t mix it up, then you could easily get tired of the prompts because they are all about all love.

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  2. rosemawrites November 15, 2016 / 4:01 am

    oooouch. ouch. feeling the hurt of your character Mandi!!! vividly written!

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  3. Joan November 15, 2016 / 11:56 am

    Envy is certainly a poison. One that kills you as you are at it

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    • mandibelle16 November 15, 2016 / 5:19 pm

      Haha yes it is a terrible one. The November Note (song quotes) have for the most part been love songs. I was eager to switch it up and take a slightly different view point on Ed Sheeran’s love song. Thank you Joan.

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