November Notes: Day 7 – Poem – Rondeau – “Stars In The Sky Reflect” #novembernotes #poetry #coldplay #amwriting


Today’s prompt song is one of my most favourite songs, “Yellow” by Coldplay.

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“Yellow” – ColdPlay

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So perfect, stars in the sky they reflect, 

Why God formed you, made you so perfect. 
Shining for you such beacons genuflect, 
The rightness so moulded, creation construed —

Your skin and bones, beautiful and true. 

Such dust and ash, made good, in all respects.

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Graciousness —He bled for our disrespect, 

Made you to be loved, adored though imperfect. 

That’s why this man looks, catching your eyes true.

So perfect, stars in the sky they reflect. 

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Why he takes time, drinking you in –perfect, 

Wonders how you’re created with such affect. 

Made so he sees you and becomes unglued, 

Knows his world is changing, each day proves —

Love of you, his girl, how you both connect. 

So perfect, stars in the sky reflect. 

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©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved. 

9 thoughts on “November Notes: Day 7 – Poem – Rondeau – “Stars In The Sky Reflect” #novembernotes #poetry #coldplay #amwriting

  1. Mack November 8, 2016 / 6:24 am

    I love that song ,but your reflection on it was so so insightful and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing!!

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    • mandibelle16 November 8, 2016 / 6:11 pm

      Thank you Mack. I’m so happy you liked it. I loved/love this song I think it makes it easier to right about than other songs in the November Notes, I haven’t heard of.

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  2. michnavs November 8, 2016 / 6:31 am

    So perfect, stars in the they reflect:…beautiful line repeated three times makes it even more meaningful..

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  3. maria November 8, 2016 / 8:19 am

    Beautiful rhythm and flow of your thoughts, Mandi. This poem feels like a gracious dance.

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    • mandibelle16 November 8, 2016 / 6:09 pm

      Thanks Maria. Lovely description, such kind words 🙂

      Like

    • mandibelle16 November 8, 2016 / 6:08 pm

      I’m glad you like this. I love how it turned out. But as you know the song is amazing and inspiring 🙂 Good choice my friend.

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