#OctPoWriMo – Day 13 – Italian Sonnet – “Grim” #amwriting #poetry


Day 13 Prompt: Flowing
” Where in your life do you need less struggle and more flow? Show us a time when you allowed yourself to go with the flow. Free write for ten minutes around one of the two sentences above or what flow/ing means to you.” 

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ESOL Nexus – British Counsel.

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When I consider how life flows, my time spent, 

Wondering how I ended up with life lent;

Dreaming in clouds, with rose coloured glasses. 

Shards of glass, metal; not all pain passes. 

Thoughtless and crude, keeping bottom line,

Knowing their fault; lying, hurting, unkind.

It’s not easy to hate, can’t name specific face,

Just spineless corporation, without grace.

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Greedy businessman who don’t care you paid, 

Money so your life wouldn’t go astray. 

Sickness you never asked for doesn’t heal. 

But you’re at fault because you try in life? 

You don’t give up, so you must be able, ripe —

Ripped to pieces, your future flow more grim. 

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©Mandibelle16.(2016) All Rights Reserved. 

5 thoughts on “#OctPoWriMo – Day 13 – Italian Sonnet – “Grim” #amwriting #poetry

  1. Thoughtless and crude, keeping bottom line,
    . . .
    Just spineless corporation, without grace.

    Too true for you. (And anyone experiencing the same.) Well-expressed grieving and grievance. God keep you, Amanda.

    Liked by 1 person

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