#OctPoWriMo – Day 12 – Licentia – “Keep Fighting” #amwriting #poetry


Day 12 Prompt: Strong

“What comes to mind when you hear the word “strong”? Here are some of my thoughts: strong storm, strong body, strong spirit, strong drink…” 

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Beautiful, bountiful time you glimmer dear, 

One moment you’re stalled, the next you’re too quick here. 

Strength is a quality not measured in moments, 

Measured in years, standing against time, back bent. 

It’s an eternal struggle with internal —

Thoughts and habits, striving to change and descern. 

Attempting to learn what experience teaches, 

Growing in ourselves and for others reaching. 

Improve upon our lives, our relationships, 

Don’t be still, life needs our participation. 

Beautiful, bountiful time you glimmer dear, 

One moment you’re stalled, the next you’re too quick here
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Strength is a quality not measured in moments, 

Measured in years, standing against time, back bent. 

Fighters push hard, keep trekking through the swamp land, 

Mud sucking at your boots, praying there’s no quicksand. 

Though tangled vines block your path, the machete cuts, 

Letting no vines keep you from glory — sword thrust. 

Old boat leaking, passing through life’s wide valleys, 

A quest you must complete, don’t you dare dally.

A light in the distance, shows your boat safe path, 

Light saves you from ending on rocks, body smashed. 

Beautiful, bountiful time you glimmer dear, 

One moment you’re stalled, the next you’re too quick here. 
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It’s an eternal struggle with internal —

Thoughts and habits, striving to change and descern. 

Looking inside ourselves, we’re often selfish, 

But we can change, help others, give back and wish —

We knew how wonderful it felt to generously, 

Give of all we are; family gives meaningfully. 

Inner strength once found, perserverance we grasp, 

Goes into the world, makes a sad person laugh. 

For finally they can overcome their issues sad, 

They see a light, see truth wins –every card hand. 

Beautiful, bountiful time you glimmer dear, 

One moment you’re stalled, the next you’re too quick here. 

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Attempting to learn what experience teaches, 

Growing in ourselves and for others reaching. 

Spread fortitude, physical, emotional and —
Spiritual; seeing  it bless, teach, understand —

Beyond words and muscle, past many barriers, 

Teach us to grow and find strength as warriors. 

Life such a battle, we do what we can in —

The time we are given, keep fighting and win. 

Glory and honour maybe yours or not yet, 

We go through life either way, path never set.

Beautiful, bountiful time you glimmer dear, 

One moment you’re stalled, the next you’re too quick here. 
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Licentia: 

“The Licentia Rhyme Form, a poetic form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of at least 3 12-line stanzas with 11 syllables per line. Of course, the poem can be elongated adding on to the following rhyme scheme: aabbccddeeAA, BBffgghhiiAA, CCjjkkllmmAA.” 

Please see Shadow Poetry for more information. 

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©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved.

9 thoughts on “#OctPoWriMo – Day 12 – Licentia – “Keep Fighting” #amwriting #poetry

  1. rosemawrites October 13, 2016 / 5:33 am

    a very very tough form but you wrote it effortlessly Mandi! and the message!! it penetrated my soul!!! thank you!

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  2. maria October 13, 2016 / 9:43 am

    Wow, profound piece Mandi! Strength really is an eternal struggle. It’s always a battle not just against everything that the world throws at you but also a battle within one’s self. You wrote it beautifully.

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    • mandibelle16 October 13, 2016 / 7:02 pm

      Thank you Maria. And yes you got the message perfectly 🙂

      Like

  3. Copper Cranes October 13, 2016 / 8:33 pm

    Amanda, a beautifully penned poem. One that I am truly happy to have read today. Thank you. ~ Mia

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    • mandibelle16 October 13, 2016 / 10:27 pm

      Thanks Mia I’m so happy you liked it. Enjoy the rest of your week

      Amanda

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      • Copper Cranes October 13, 2016 / 10:57 pm

        You’re so welcome Amanda. Thank you, please enjoy the rest of your week too.

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  4. clcouch123 October 13, 2016 / 9:12 pm

    Beautiful, bountiful time you glimmer dear,

    One moment you’re stalled, the next you’re too quick here.

    This rhyme and refrain of yours is as substantial as it is tuneful. It’s appealing in a soulful way. You speak to the artistic process (for me, at least) throughout this poem. Amanda.

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