Three Line Tales: Poem – Three Lunes – “Disgusting Orange String” #3Linetales #poetry #amwriting 


Thanks to Sonya of Only 100 Words for this week’s photo prompt:

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Image Credit: Philip Estrada

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Orange ball of string you’re,

Disgusting, so blinding, 

Why construction signs are warnings.

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An in colour in Fall, 

There’s a reason, 

I hate your putrid presence. 

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Ball of string I’m tossing —

You, you’re a —

Loose end — J’adore calmer bleu.
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©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved.

11 thoughts on “Three Line Tales: Poem – Three Lunes – “Disgusting Orange String” #3Linetales #poetry #amwriting 

  1. Melinda Kucsera September 18, 2016 / 3:08 am

    I like the play on words at the end, where you call the ball of string ‘a loose end’ 🙂

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    • mandibelle16 September 18, 2016 / 6:10 pm

      Thanks Melinda. Yeah, I kind of felt, it was something to get rid of. I was interesting though, Bikergurl used the loose ends as well and she wrote about them being freedom. Something which never occurred to me lol.

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  2. clcouch123 September 18, 2016 / 3:40 pm

    Witty, acerbic lines. The feelings of dissatisfaction come through sharply. Well done, Mandi!

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  3. bikurgurl September 19, 2016 / 6:31 am

    I love the loose end, but didn’t see the putridness in the color you did….but you articulated it with such flair, how can I not love the lines? 🙂

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    • mandibelle16 September 19, 2016 / 7:44 pm

      Hehe. For me I’m not a orange person, I really don’t like the colour. Although, on some people it looks just great (my brother for instance with darker skin tone and brown hair). I thought it interesting how I portrayed loose ends in a totally opposite way then you. Happy you liked 🙂

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