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Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer: Saving The Puppy


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Horse and Car
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Sweet Caroline waited for her rider, Joy (who was attending a party at the neighbor’s ranch) when Caroline heard a terrified yap from beside her. It was a heat-sick puppy trapped in a car.

Caroline had heard Joy saying certain people were ignorant, believing it was fine to leave a pet in the car when the temperature was boiling inside.

The puppy whimpered and with all her might, Caroline kicked a window out of the car with her hoof.

Joy ran when she heard the car window shatter and Caroline whiny. She gasped, observing the languishing puppy inside. 

Taking both Caroline and the puppy just outside the party tents, Joy gave the thirsty puppy bottled water and scraps of meat from the buffet.

A furious couple Joy recognized, approached her wanting their puppy back, but Joy refused. Instead, she dialled the local RCMP and reported the couple, for leaving their dog in a hot car.

Sweet Caroline nuzzled her puppy friend as the puppy slept on Joy’s shoulder.


©Mandibelle16.(2016) All Rights Reserved.

26 thoughts on “Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer: Saving The Puppy”

  1. Sweet Caroline is a hero! She saved the puppy from dying in a hot car! This is a great story, Mandi! I’m glad the owners didn’t get their puppy back! Thank you so much for the kind compliment! You are a very sweet lady. 🙂

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    1. Thank you PJ for the comments on my story and for you own compliment. I enjoy your FF challenges. You always pick out great photos to write about. And Yes Sweet Caroline, did what she had to do 🙂

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  2. Caroline and Joy are quite a team. They inform us effectively about the dangers and stupidity of endangering innocent life. I cheer for the moment when the window is knocked out. How many of us want to do this when a pet or child is inside the car?

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    1. Yeah I agree Christopher. A couple left their dog in the car when I was at the drugstore the other day. They just went inside but it was quite hot here, and of course hotter in the car. Its hard to know, should we call the cops right away or break a window? When do people learn, especially when its children. Thanks for your comments again 🙂

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  3. It’s extremely hot where I live now and I keep hearing story after story on the news about children and animals being left in hot cars. I just heard one on the news last night where a baby was left in the car so the people watching her could go shopping. I don’t get it. Glad this puppy got rescued 🙂

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