Sunday Photo Fiction: Part 2 – Nineteen-Years-Later #amwriting #flashfiction

Thank you to Alistair Forbes for hosting SPF. 


A Mixed Bag


“What are you writing Uncle?” Chad asked Sam.”And why’re you using a calligraphy pen? Carry that in your back pocket?”

“Chad, you shouldn’t be joking.You’re going to give this letter to a trusted bicycle courier. My friend I’m writing can help us; he knows my writing. Pretend the courier outside the hotel side entrance is a buddy.” Sam instructed.

Chad grabbed the letter. “I have a lot of questions Uncle Sam, about my Dad and about why we’re in trouble.” 

Sam nodded. “Go meet the courier, then we’ll talk. I’ll sweep the room for bugs while you’re gone again. I don’t think they’re any, otherwise . . .” 

Chad gulped, quickly leaving the hotel room. He walked to the side entrance of the hotel expecting a guy his age on a bike. 

Instead, he found a trashed bicycle. There was no courier, only drops of blood.

Chad ran as fast he could back to his hotel room terrified. He thought he had taken the right turn, but when he turned around he saw he was at room 395 and not 305. 

“Are you lost hon?” A smiling hotel maid asked him.

“I’m fine.” 

“No you’re not. You are definitely not fine Chad.” A deep voice said.

Chad peered behind him to see his Uncle Sam standing there. Sam shot the maid through the head and collected a gun the maid had hidden in her uniform.

“You can’t trust anyone.” Uncle Sam told Chad harshly.

Chad followed his Uncle out of the hotel, clutching the calligraphy written letter in his hand. 


Please see Part 1 here.


©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved.

18 thoughts on “Sunday Photo Fiction: Part 2 – Nineteen-Years-Later #amwriting #flashfiction

    • mandibelle16 July 18, 2016 / 1:45 am

      Thanks Christopher. It’s a continuation from last week’s Sunday Photo Fiction. So hopefully, next Sunday you’ll find out some more 🙂

      Liked by 2 people

  1. Joan July 18, 2016 / 6:26 am

    Beautiful though sppoky. Just keep them coming

    Liked by 1 person

    • mandibelle16 July 18, 2016 / 3:12 pm

      Thank you Joan. Next Sunday, depending on photo prompt, we’ll see what happens.


  2. ceayr July 18, 2016 / 8:30 am

    Good grief, Amanda, such violent writing from such a sweet young lady!
    Galloped along, no respite from the action and building tension.
    Good stuff.

    Liked by 1 person

    • mandibelle16 July 18, 2016 / 3:11 pm

      lol. Thanks CE. Well the maid would have shot Chad no questions asked, she intended too. So, Uncle Sam didn’t have much of a choice but to shoot first. She’s an agent for the enemy. Thanks for your comments again 🙂


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