Poem: Tritina – “Soft Comes The Breeze.” #wordhighjuly #poetry #amwriting #amihan


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Soft comes the breeze upon my face, 

Feather light kiss, sighing in sleep;

Drowsing in light, rustling of sheets.

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Drowsing in light rustling of sheets,

Soft comes the breeze upon my face;

Feather light kiss, sighing in sleep.

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Feather light kiss, sighing in sleep, 

Drowsing in light, rustling of sheets;

Soft comes the breeze upon my face.

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©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights reserved.

15 thoughts on “Poem: Tritina – “Soft Comes The Breeze.” #wordhighjuly #poetry #amwriting #amihan

  1. clcouch123 July 19, 2016 / 1:16 am

    The intertwining of lines and the lines themselves are romantic and attractive. Thrice-emphasizing a pleasurable and calm experience. Vacation. Honeymoon. Getaway. Could folk ask for more, Mandi? Or quiet days of desire at home.

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    • mandibelle16 July 19, 2016 / 1:17 am

      Thank you. I’m just picturing a beach, a tropical place by a beach, sleeping outside, and a good book 🙂

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      • clcouch123 July 19, 2016 / 6:26 pm

        Great picturing! Sleeping and reading by the beach. Wind blowing away the humidity. I added that. We’re having a heat wave in the Mid-Atlantic, so (all) this is a relief to contemplate.

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  2. Copper Cranes July 19, 2016 / 1:54 am

    Mandi, “Soft Comes The Breeze” is lovely. The words capture a romantic feeling and the image is perfect, ideal for a warm evening, beautiful. ~ Mia

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    • mandibelle16 July 19, 2016 / 4:56 pm

      Thank you Rosema. I like the form, although I haven’t used it much. It has a meditative quality with the repetition and the right words 🙂

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  3. Marie Therese July 19, 2016 / 11:39 am

    I love this. Gentle, meditative, peaceful. Thank you ❤

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