Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer: The Candy Store #flashfiction #amwriting

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It was an odd store. Adeline, the store owner, insisted only children were allowed to remain inside and make purchases.

Parents would walk in the store and smile when they realized the quaint shop was full of candy, any form of candy which they or their kids craved.

Once meeting the trusted bubbly owner Adeline, parents allowed their kids into the store with their allowance, and often extra money to buy treats for Mom and Dad. 

The candy store was within walking distance and parents began letting their kids go whenever they wished.

Sadly, Adeline was not only a candy connoisseur, but a witch. A witch from the same line of witches Hansel and Grettle had bested; but Adeline had learned from her ancestors.

Magic in the candy made parents forget they had kids, who slowly began disappearing after visiting the candy store enough to have fattened up for Adeline’s candy making.

The affects of the magic on the parents wore off months later when they realized their children were gone. 

All that remained was a store made of candy. 

Adeline had disappeared, moving on to the next town.


©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved.


37 thoughts on “Flash Fiction for the Aspiring Writer: The Candy Store #flashfiction #amwriting”

  1. Goodness Mandi what a harrowing tale. It would be awful realising months later the kids had gone….I imagine trying to explain it to the police…..very interesting take on the image…well done..

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      1. My pleasure. I’ve been watching a TV series called Heartland which is set in Alberta all those snow covered mountains in the background of some beautiful landscapes.

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      2. Oh yes, my Dad was watching that one too. I’ve seen quite a few episodes. Where I am we are fairly close to the mountains but can’t quite see them. But a two or three hour drive and their are lovely places such as Banff, Canmore and Jasper. Beautiful places to hike, explore, rock climb, ski in the winter, or just enjoy. Good vacation if you ever have the chance to visit Alberta 🙂

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      1. Lol. You are so nice. Thank you I’m happy you thought so. I had to shorten it a lot from the original. But I find the best short fiction stories are like that, you cut away so what’s left is only what’s needed to be said. I’m sure you find that at your work as well. Have a great night/day.

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂 And one should never trust the owner of a candy store especially now when we know how unhealthy candy is. You gotta wonder about someone who sets out to sell candy and only candy in the face of that.

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      2. You are right. But funny enough, in certain places around Canada in tourist destinations, there are places who only sell candy, of many different kinds. As a kid coming across such stores, it was a goldmine. Funny enough as well, close to my neighbourhood, is a small area of shops in the neighbourhood of highlands. There is a coffee shop and book place, a few designer shops, a few restaurants, an antique store, and you guessed it — a shop that only sells candy ( as far as I know). Thanks again Melinda.

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    1. Yes indeed. I hope she does too. Although, I don’t know how you defeat someone with such powerful magic, who can disappearance fade away at a snap of her fingers. Thanks for commenting Jacqueline 🙂

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