Poem: Rondel – ” Thoughts too Deep” #wordhighjuly #poetry



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Contemplate and speculate, 

Absorbed in careful thoughts explore.

Searching within, why am I torn?

Decisions difficult await.

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I’m no philosopher ruminating,

Wonder without, within my core.

Contemplate and speculate.

Absorbed in careful thoughts explore.

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Thinking, wears one out, unsated, 

Answers true or some folklore.

Scientific explanation, something more?

Faith and the heart have their say made.

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Contemplate and speculate 

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What is wrong and what is done right?

Consumed by such thoughts of inner voice.

The problem: always, forever, having choice

Sometimes the wish to never think fights.

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Float away, grace whirlpool, without sight.

Easier to be blind than make your choice.

What is wrong and what is done right?

Consumed by such thoughts of inner voice.

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Is there strength in your heart, might? 

Or do you follow whoever’s voice? 

Let others think for you, make choices.

Choosing right, requires foresight.

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What is wrong and what is done right? 

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15 thoughts on “Poem: Rondel – ” Thoughts too Deep” #wordhighjuly #poetry”

    1. Thanks so much. Glad you like. I’m not sure what the syllable count for a rondel was I just assumed it 8 syllables to a line? But I looked on Shadow Poetry and it didn’t have a syllable count ( a specific meter) so I think as long as you kept the rhyme pattern, you can do whatever meter you like. Iambic pentameter for instance, since it’s common. I use my fingers and count out the syllables as I write, and check My poem at the end a time or two to make sure the syllable count is correct. Hope that helps 🙂

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      1. Mhm.. thank you for sharing about your way of approach I’ve picked some points. And one thing I feel crucial is to have a relevant pair in Ab, the one which refrains, and especially A which could give an anticipatory beginning and a satisfying end.

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  1. “Choosing right, requires foresight.” — amen to that! You ask some deep and probing questions in this piece. It’s a perfect to spark profound thoughts. I need to go think about some of the questions raised 🙂

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  2. I find these lines especially compelling:

    Float away, grace whirlpool, without sight.

    Easier to be blind than make your choice.

    Speaking to the difficulty in facing decisions and decision-making. The repeated question of “What is wrong and what is done right?” is also thought- and heart-provoking. This is an excellent study of the Filipino word and the poetic form!

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