Poem: Lune (5,3,5) – ” Butterflies Don’t Pass” #wordhighjuly

Day 1: July 1 ( Canada Day.)





Your thoughts are distinctive, 

Eyes crystal blue, 

Noticing everything and seeing truth.


Your words are ambrosia sweet, 

Delight to taste, 

Chocolate brownies bite by bite.


Scent of Jasmine on your, 

T-shirt I keep,

Smell of wood, of earth.


Strong built muscles lift close, 

Skin delicate and, 

Smooth meeting skin of yours.


Through the senses we absorb,

Each other and, 

Kiling assaults me, tiny terror.


Years pass, the butterflies don’t, 

I hold our, 

Love; nurture, its growth flourishes.


©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved


21 thoughts on “Poem: Lune (5,3,5) – ” Butterflies Don’t Pass” #wordhighjuly

  1. maria July 1, 2016 / 3:12 am

    Awwe!! Love this Mandi! Woderful Lune ❤
    I'd love to be assaulted by 'kilig' any time now!! 😀

    Liked by 1 person

  2. chesca July 1, 2016 / 12:29 pm

    The imagery is beautiful! Kinilig ako. Love to see more of your posts! I, too, am participating in Word High July 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  3. rosemawrites July 2, 2016 / 11:24 am

    awwww. this melts my heart, my dear! beyond kilig! 😀

    P.S. Happy Canada Day!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. clcouch123 July 2, 2016 / 7:36 pm

    I never would have thought to place “tiny terror” beside “kilig.” Certainly–emotionally–it can be a scary sensation!

    Yay to Canada (for Canada Day)–the silent revolution!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Janice Wald July 4, 2016 / 12:34 pm

    Hi Amanda,
    Pretty sexual due to your strong use of imagery!
    Thanks for bringing your post to the Blogger’s Pit Stop last week.
    Janice, Pit Stop Crew

    Liked by 1 person

    • mandibelle16 July 4, 2016 / 5:17 pm

      Hi Janice. I guess it is. I never thought of it that way. Hope it doesn’t offend you. Thank you for reading and commenting.


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