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Writing 101: Simple Acts – The Mundane Demonstrates Love. #everydayinspiration


This writing 101 prompt is to experiment with word count. I usually, don’t limit my posts unless I have to. Some of the hardest pieces I write can only be 100 words long. But since I have a choice, I’m going to write and see what comes out.

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There is a beginning and and an end to a story. Then there is the inbetween. Often, the inbetween is the part of the story we skip over, we miss the everyday mundane details of our characters lives which would bore many readers. But it is fascinating that in real life, the simple and mundane acts in life can be the most meaningful: 

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Everyday for the past three or four-years, my Dad cuts up a bowl of fruit for me in the morning. He started to do it when a Chinese student was staying in our house to finish her last two years of highschool and later attend University where we live.

Sometimes, the student didn’t eat her fruit, so I would eat it when I woke up later in the morning. One day I ate a bowl of fruit left on the table and my Dad came back from his run:

“Did you eat the bowl of fruit on the table?” he asked me.

“Yes, I thought it was Cristina’s and she didn’t have time to eat it,” I said feeling like a little child being scolded.

“I don’t mind cutting you a bowl of fruit Amanda but that was my bowl of fruit. I cut it so it would be ready when I came home from my run.”

“I’m sorry,” I said alarmed. “I wouldn’t have eaten it if I knew it was yours.” 

“It’s no trouble; I’ll cut an extra bowl of fruit it the morning. It’s not any extra work for me.” My Dad said smiling.

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Cristina (the student) has moved out but almost every morning when I wake up around 10:30am, there is a bowl of fruit waiting for me. 

As my Dad allows his grown-up daughter to live in his house (on cheap rent) because of her health, he cuts this same daughter fruit for breakfast. They’re both simple things, but they let me know to him even though I’m an adult, I’m still his little squirell and he loves me a great deal. They are mundane acts which demonstrates my Dad loves me more than any grander gesture could.

How many times do we go by those we love in our lives, not demonstrating our love? Yes in their hearts our loved ones know we love them. But it’s small gestures each day which truly show what we feel for our loved ones. Hugs and pats on the back; saying you love them or appreciate something they did out loud; little treats such as baking or buying them their favourite cookies or ice cream; doing something to make a loved ones life easier; or doing things they appreciate. Simple mundane tasks and moments of thought. The inbetween is where life counts.

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18 thoughts on “Writing 101: Simple Acts – The Mundane Demonstrates Love. #everydayinspiration”

  1. There’s this phrase, the devil’s in the details. I don’t know where that phrase came from or why it might be true. I don’t think it is. I think the truth is that divinity is in the details. You show that here, lovingly.

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    1. Thank you Christopher. Happy you liked this, yes I suppose the devil is in the details. But I like your take much better ‘the divinity’ is in the details. Our fathers on earth, or father figures, emulate our father in heaven, the good ones anyways 🙂

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  2. It reminds me of this movie quote
    It is the small everyday deed of ordinary folks that keeps the darkness at bay. Small acts of kindness and love.
    It is a beautiful post and your father is a kind soul (:

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  3. The in between is called life. We work the fringes thinking they matter. I love the bowl of fruit thing. My dad taught me photography, organic chemistry (it bothered him knowing how I studied for his course), and how to treat others. He thought he taught me other things but I was ahead of those curves and just smiled. 😉

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    1. Hehe. I always thought I was my Dads fav. It’s a crushing thing when you’re a small child and your Dad is all you want to see cause he works and then you find out just like anyone he’s flawed. But he took me to many concerts like the choral and symphony kind. He was a chemistry teacher too 🙂 but in high school and became a principal pretty quick. We both love hockey and the CFL football but he has a dif football team then I. My Dad is always calm under pressure and makes the bad manageable. I’m glad you had a great Dad, even though he’s gone. I’ve a good one too. Though it scares me now that I’m older than the age he had kids at, that he’s getting older and is 60 next year.

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  4. Enjoy the moments. Life happens so fast around us. Little chunks of time become weeks before you know it. The scary part isn’t that your parents are flawed, it is why you recognize those flaws. 😉

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