Poem: Free Verse – “Just Go”



I want to just go, 

Travel somewhere,

Where waterfalls splash,

And swimming is the norm.


I want to just go,

See the Duomo in Florence.

Walk the streets of Milan.

See so much art, I’m blinded.


I want to just go,

View waters so blue.

See Coral reefs glow.

Relax in the sand.


I want to just go,

Shop silk scarves, leather shoes,

Barter and buy,

Even though I’ve been taken.


I want to just go,

Drink bellinies and Margaritas,

Do a few shots straight tequila,

Sit on the deck, by the pool.


I want to just go,

Hike the trail through fiolage,

Pretend I’ve no allergies,

See the sunset at night.


I want to just go,

But limitations stop me,

Energy and time,

Money and people too.


I want to just go,

Someday I’ll break free.


Β©Mandibelle16. (2016) All Rights Reserved.


30 thoughts on “Poem: Free Verse – “Just Go”

  1. Priceless Joy March 19, 2016 / 5:01 pm

    I believe that too, Mandi! One day you will break free and be able to go do all these things and more!! XOXO

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    • mandibelle16 March 19, 2016 / 5:52 pm

      Thanks PJ. I think I just need to plan a summer vacation soon. Then I will have something look forward to. Did you ever the chance to travel much?


      • Priceless Joy March 19, 2016 / 6:05 pm

        I don’t travel much Mandi. I have a bad back and tailbone which makes traveling difficult for me. I have 4 metal rods in my lower back and it effects my tailbone.


  2. Deanne March 19, 2016 / 5:11 pm

    Me too… Beautiful poem!!! I share you sentiments πŸ™‚ You’ll get that opportunity soon. Hugs

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      • Deanne March 19, 2016 / 6:37 pm


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    • mandibelle16 March 19, 2016 / 5:51 pm

      Thank you so much Mihrank! It means a lot. I have read your beautiful lyrics so I’m deeply appreciative of your comment!


      • mihrank March 19, 2016 / 5:55 pm

        thank you deeply and sincerely, this means a lot to me..May you always continue to shine!

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  3. Pamela March 19, 2016 / 5:35 pm

    I love the last two verses. “I want to just go. Someday I’ll break free”. This world is such a beautiful place but we seldom get to enjoy it. Busy with the everyday necessities of life. Great poem!

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    • mandibelle16 March 19, 2016 / 5:50 pm

      Thank you so much. You are correct it is hard to break free, but then again sometimes I wonder if it us who stop ourselves, when sometimes we really have to make the choice to go. Just a thought lol.

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  4. Alan Maria Jose March 19, 2016 / 6:13 pm

    Hi, I’ve to say that I really enjoyed the owesome works you’ve posted on your blog !! Really great writing style !!
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    For my masters thesis, which I’m doing on blogging, as to why people blog; their motivations for blogging, I need bloggers to attend a survey. That’s how I came across this blog.

    It would be of great help for my research work, If you could submit your responses for the following questionnaire. Please click on the link below. You might be asked to sign in to your gmail account. Do participate in the survey. Also please forward it to bloggers you know.


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    • mandibelle16 March 19, 2016 / 7:00 pm

      Thanks so much. I’m glad you enjoy my blog. I will definitely fill out the survey for you πŸ™‚

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      • Alan Maria Jose March 20, 2016 / 1:35 am

        Thank you for considering participating in the survey !! Really great help for my research πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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      • mandibelle16 March 20, 2016 / 1:37 am

        Yeah no problem. I’m trying to get into one, so I understand they are much work!

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      • mandibelle16 March 20, 2016 / 2:14 am

        Thanks, if I get in it will be a lot of creative writing actually. Good luck with yours πŸ™‚

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  5. rosemawrites March 20, 2016 / 10:57 am

    I so look forward on seeing you and I breakfree! There is a great world to see, Mandi! ❀

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  6. clcouch123 March 21, 2016 / 1:04 am

    “See so much art, I’m blinded.” What a stunning way to describe the experience. I find your verse on shopping to be comforting. I want to buy and not worry about being taken. To me, bargaining and not the actual bargain would be the savor of the experience. Break free and go. That’s a good wish because it’s doable.

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    • mandibelle16 March 21, 2016 / 2:51 am

      Thanks for commenting. I hope it’s a doable wish. My Dad likes to Barter too, I hate it! But I suppose it’s a good skill to learn when you travel to certain places. I tried in Mexico, I’m not much good πŸ™‚


  7. joyroses13 March 21, 2016 / 2:00 am

    Awesome poem! I wanna just go also! Let’s go! πŸ™‚ Someday I hope you can!

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