Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practitioner: Beneath the Stairs.


“Carissa can you come see me in the basement?” Kathy, Carissa’s mother calls to her daughter, my niece.

” I’ll be here when you get back,” I tell Carissa who shakes her head.

” I don’t like the basement” she says, “There’s a monster and he hides under the stairs. He is going to eat us.”If only the monsters in real-life were as harmless as the one’s Carissa sees.

“I’ll go down the stairs with you and we can both look to see if there’s a monster there okay?” I tell Carissa who nods her head. It seemed like a good idea at the time . . .

I take Carissa’s hand and we both descend the stairs.We listen for Kathy. I notice the light bulbs as they flicker on and off. “Kathy?” I call out and Carissa’s grip tightens. She is staring  at a dark mass beneath the stairs. I use my Iphone as light to better see.

Beneath the stairs I scream. I have never seen such demonic eyes and large teeth. Kathy’s blood pools at my feet. I hold my arm out to Carissa, “Go, take my phone Carissa. You know how to use it.Call 911. Call Daddy.”

Carissa runs up the stairs and I absorb the pain of sharp teeth and the foul stench of breath.

Word Count: 206

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21 thoughts on “Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practitioner: Beneath the Stairs.”

      1. It’s a great question. I often wonder how kids can imagine such terrifying things when all they watch (assuming) are the fluffy monsters on Disney and Sesame Street. Maybe they are real 😮

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  1. Great story! 🙂 That’s quite a shock and very vivid! I’m afraid calling 911 won’t help the mother, or her niece but might save Carissa . I remember having a lot of nightmares that involved monsters and a lot of them woke me up and I was glad, so the nightmare would stop, but I was afraid to go back to sleep.

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