Writing 201- Limerick/Enjambment – Judged Imperfect


Rhyme Scheme: aabba

If you tell me why people love 

Each other; You’d have to agree it’s a blessing from above 

Because people are imperfect and their flaws are

Visible enticements on why you should stay far

Away from them even if the gloves 

Are off; and you’ve seen someone for who they really appear to be. 

Because nothing is worse then knowing a person and then realizing there not who you see

They are a liar, a stealer of your time

And a cheater of your ideal, what a crime

That you shouldn’t be allowed to know someone and that they should be

See – through, completely visible to you and should inspire a thought

If they are imperfect and to be stripped of there shield then why not you – ought

You imperfect person, judging others

When you should act as brothers

And perfection should never be sought.

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7 thoughts on “Writing 201- Limerick/Enjambment – Judged Imperfect

  1. Pawcific Purrsea October 8, 2015 / 11:21 pm

    I think you nailed this one! Well done. It just doesn’t seem to sound like a limerick anymore. I can’t seem to kick the limerick sound in mine and enjamb it..mol =^,,^=

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