Sonnet “Loss”


The pain that stings within my heart

When you decided to depart

It felt like I would fall apart

At the littlest sound I start.

I am in grief and it is bitter sweet

The memories we made follow me

But I have  no sight I cannot see

The spark that flew isn’t heat

Now I pray, release, release.

Answer me once, forget me not

Don’t leave me here to beg and rot

Have you no pity I need peace

Grant me some time so I know

You did not just throw me away.

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7 thoughts on “Sonnet “Loss””

    1. Thanks. I learned as an English Mjr in University. If you can find the rhythm and speak it out load as you are writing it helps. So, you have 5 points where you are going to stress your words. And inbetween every stress think of two little dashes that stand for two words or parts of words that u aren’t going to stress. Does that make sense?

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