Day 4 – Hippo


I
read that
all hippos love to be
beneath the water and
under a tree. They do the
things that hippos do and
bathe and swim just
the whole day through, and often glance a hippo
eye, at all the little hippos more pink then grey. They
chase. away the nasty gators. Because little hippos make
the best gator meat. A hippo will open up his mouth and he
or she will roar, pink tongue lolling and straight teeth
threatening to chomp upon a gator tale. And as safety
returns to the hippo village the
hippos roll in the water in hippo
happiness. A. baby snuggles up
to his hippo mama. All is well
in the hippo vil. All is right for hippos.

I can see the shape but it isn’t showing up?

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7 thoughts on “Day 4 – Hippo”

  1. Likely a issue with html coding. Concrete poems and web code are not always friendly. What you might try is writing your poem in a text editor (like Notepad) to make it the shape you want, then taking a screenprint, and editing that screenprint in an image editor to remove all the extra stuff from the screenprint, finally saving your screenprint as an image and uploading to your blog. Whew!

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